I know just how you feel, you've put it just right. Beautiful piece, keep it up Sarah, for your talents will take you to heights you've never dreamed of...

Good poem. so true too. 5/5

This is a great piece(in fact it could fit along side my "And Always I dream Alone').It is so simply and honestly written.A nice flow to it.Perhaps it could use a bit touching up but the message and the underlying emotion make it a strong, heartfelt piece of work.

These are some great lines. very true, sometimes, we all need friends... awesome job!