Untittled...

by sarah   Oct 20, 2005


The pain i've felt
and the tears i've Cried
no one will no just how i feel inside
i cant keep going on like this
im sick of crying
im sick of running to hide
everytime i hear your name
it isnt fear
i cant keep it locked up inside
for much longer
its driveing me insane
i cant keep lieing to myself and everyone else
its killing me
i just so bad want you outa my life
i want you outa my head
just go away and leave me alone
cant you see how much pain im in
cant you see im about to explode
just please get outa my life
get outa my head
im going insane

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  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    You have to let some1 no how u feel so that u can be a stronger person there is hope out there dont let it die dont give up hope nice poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I feel the desperation in this poem and I appreciate that this is written from the heart;
    :D

    I have a few suggestions that might help you with this poem -

    1 "Cryed" - This is spelled "Cried"

    2 "Isnt" - "Isn't" or "Is not"

    3 "Cant" - "Can't" or "Cannot"

    4 "Driveing" - "Driving" :)

    5 "Outa" - This would read alot more smoothly if it was "Out of".

    However this is your choice whether to take my advice or not.

    - Cheers;
    Elegantly Wasted.

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