Comments : Time for the pain to stop

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    *tears*, no hunni please....don't say that!!! you were the one who made me stay when I wanted to let go, you were strong for me, I need you here...I can't make it without you, if you go I go, I swear.....You have always been strong in my eyes and "seeing" you this weak makes me sad. No matter how many times you tell me that you are okay and no matter how many times it seems like you don't wanna talk to me, I don't believe you, you are deffinately NOT okay....I begging on my knees here, please don't let go, please talk to me.....I won't let you go, I won't let you give up...NEVER!!!I am so worried about you...

    *Much Love Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Sabrina hunny don't make me feel bad, i want you to stay and be strong - something i don't feel great enough to do. Don't run away from it like me. I'm so scared right now. I won't go but if i don't i'll just keep suffering and it hurts like i can't explain. Nobody will listen to me anymore and i have nobody around me who cares for me anymore. I know i'm not okay but just promise me you will stay too.

  • 18 years ago

    by authum darkness

    This is so sad. Why do you want to give up your life? This poem sounds like my neighbor sometimes. She doesn't believe anyone loves her, which is not true. Please don't give up a wonderful life. You only get one... :(

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh hun this was deep and really t0uched my heart. such a heartfelt piece. g0o p0em! kepe it up
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    ..*x00o00x*..

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    That poem was outstanding, It had me from the start to the finish. Great job and i hope to read more soon so keep writing you have alot of talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Aww i know exactly how you feel hun ecspecially tonight, this seriously actually made me cry...i've been crying all night but this made me think about it all over..and i think thats great your going on my favorites!!!! dont hate yourself and you havn't had enough, be strong hun i hope our okay!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Good poem.. 5/5..
    i feel the same way

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    How can you tell, that your mission in life is over? Did you get a manual with everything you had to do? Nobody knows what it is they have to do here. It might seem like there is nothing else for you to do here but feel pain and sorrow, but this is no reason to trow in the towel. Keep fighting. If you lost your reason for fighting, forget about that one, find anotherone and keep going.
    Hang Strong
    Tim

    "Happiness isn't a goal, it's a by-product."

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Sweety, I would never make you feel bad, I was just being honest....You are truely my leading star, the one who made me feel strong when I was weak, you made me stand when I was at my breaking point and now I can't so anything to make you feel stronger or loved.....You know that people care about you, I really do, otherwise I wouldn't be worried about hunni...and I really am!!!I love you....You are my special friend and I will never give up on you, but I need you to stay....I can't make it without you......

    *Love you always - Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by brookiebrooke

    Thats wicked good. Keep writing b/c ur awesome!!

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Hey, dw wwe have all had enough sometimes and trust me ive experienced it more than once so just hang on there it will all work out. Plz read some of ma poems n see what u think. Nat mwaz

  • 18 years ago

    by lacy byrum

    I just wanted to tell you that poem reminds me of stuff i write and it was awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Whoa, I felt so sad when I read this poem. Reflected me in a way I guess...
    Loved the poem.
    Cheers,
    Love,
    Laterz,
    Shirlz