Wow!! this is a really great poem and really origanal 2!! keep writing and stay true
xoxo Shae Radford

Wow this poem is amazing
it has such s "voice" to it
i love the analoges
great job!

Beautiful..
wow...

i loved it...so much.

incredible.

Another awesome poem you wrote! I would really appreciate if somebody with your skills would take a look at some of my latest poems and tell me what you think! =)
I hope I hear from you

xx A.

Omg its so good the cancer thing has a definate imapct keep it up you've got talet way to go !!!

That was a very well written poem. I like the way it didn't rhyme, but yet even without a rhyme scheme, the words still flew together very well. Well done!

*keep smiling*
Katy

Right!!!>>>>.....

... well u write in the same style i do, good job

Outstanding... I loved it... Keep it up!!!

This poem is too dark for me.It is steeped in self-pity. Real love desires the best for the beloved not the destruction of slit wrists. The challenge is to live life not to exit in self-pity.

WoW!! your words had so much strength to them. This poem is amazing.

Wow this was really well written great work i loved it sad yes but really well done xox rc

Well i liked it yet its a wee bit depressing lol.
I liek the blood word bit particularly

Well i liked it yet its a wee bit depressing lol.
I liek the blood word bit particularly

Wow... simply amazing, hun. You've got so much talent!!