Seeping Reasons And Fading Hopes.

by Not Bulletproof   Oct 22, 2005


Oh what is the point of reason,
If reason cannot be found?
The mind whirls and twirls,
As you cascade with tears, to the ground.

Reason and purpose is what you seek,
Hope is what holds you by a thread.
Love has you hurt and feeling weak,
As your weakness seeps and starts to spread.

Your heart is torn by lovely Her,
And faith drips from your closed eyes.
What has She done to ruin you?
How could she break your hopes so high?

The gold around Her finger,
Must have turned her mind around.
For she whispered of the end,
And left without a sound.

Now since she took all you had,
Your mind kills and spill and overflows.
Reason to live, seeps out your veins,
And follows She, as she goes.

Sarah Gammon ©
10/20/05

Thanks for reading -xxx-.

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  • 18 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Holy!! this was amazing, i dont know if i fully understood everything, but thats what i loved about it, that'll theres something to figure out and i'll go back and read it again just to see what I missed. Great flow, great, great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    I don't know what to say, it seems like you took this right out of my head. I really am speechless. I think the only thing that kinda had me wondering about was the significance of you capitalizing She and Her? I dunno if theres some kind of inference or what. But I love this poem. it's not like one of those "I hate you for breaking my heart" poems, it's more along the lines of the inevitable and there's no hard feelings, I mean it's not her fault that her feelings changed, right? well I dunno. but it was a very well written poem.

    Take Care,
    Renee

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