by ♪AlwaysOnMyMind♪ Oct 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Today was amazing |
by Jenny
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I thought that was such a sweet, simple poem. Nice job!! |
by jaki
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Nicely written although the same rhyme pattern doesn't follow throughout the piece, in the first, thrid and fourth stanza the rhyme is in the second and last line, but in the second stanza there is no rhyme. nice work anyway |