I USED TOO

by ANNA   Oct 22, 2005


I USED TO LIKE THIS BOY
I THINK HE LIKED ME TOO
WE WENT OUT FOR AWHILE
BUT IT DIDN'T GO THROUGH
I ASKED HIM IF WE COULD BE FRIENDS
HE DID NOT SAY A WORD
WHAT REALLY HURT ME THE MOST
IS ALL THE STUPID THING I'VE HEARD
THE THINGS HE DID
THE THINGS HE SAD
HE COULD END UP IN JAIL
OR WORSE DEAD
SO I ASK U FATHER UP ABOVE
PROTECT THE GUT THAT I LOVE
HELP HIM TO SEE THAT I LOVE HIM AND HOPE HE LOVES ME.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Awesome, it was absolutely amazing, i think it was sad in a way, but i loved how you asked god for help, and that really stuck out in the poem, it was well written
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    It's very sweet and cute. ^_^ Though... why is it in ALL CAPS?

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*You are my only one*~

    This is an amazing poem. It has really good structure and rhyme scheme. Thanx for commenting on my poem. 5/5 i love this poem! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Heavy
    5/5
    xaaronx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Williams

    Great poem. It was wonderful. Keep up the wonderful work. 5/5.
    *J.W.*

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