Betrayal

by Jack Gilardi   Oct 22, 2005


The torment is unbearable
I feel like im rotting inside
The pain is to much to handle
I want to curl up and die.

I felt nothing but love for you
but you chose not to see,
even though im always there for you
you chose not to do the same for me.

The whispered lies of specters
To hear their horrible cries
remind me of the pain that is
seeping out of my eyes.

On the ground im writing this,
In a pool of blood
That is welling out of a hole in my back
where your knife once was.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jack Gilardi

    Thank you for commenting be it bad or good. I like to be critiqued because it helps me know what and what not to write. Plz comment. It helps me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I think you done a great job on your poem and how you express yourself. I think I know where you come from and I love the way you use your words, so again great poem.

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