by Jack Gilardi Oct 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The torment is unbearable |
by Jack Gilardi
Thank you for commenting be it bad or good. I like to be critiqued because it helps me know what and what not to write. Plz comment. It helps me. |
by Autuumnbree
I think you done a great job on your poem and how you express yourself. I think I know where you come from and I love the way you use your words, so again great poem. |