Mom please listen?

by DanceAngel   Oct 24, 2005


Mom would u listen to me for once
my life is not so easy what don't u understand
I cant be everything u want me to be
It seems whatever I do it is never enough
Y cant u just let me be
I'm trying as hard as I can to please u
Y cant u just accept my boyfriend
Hes not going away anytime soon
We are planning to get married
U just wouldn't understand
Ud tell me that I'm to young
That I'm making a big mistake, I'm throwing away my life
U want me to go to college do everything u never got the chance to do
U don't care what I want to do with my life
I'm not saying this to hurt u
I'm just trying to make u understand that my life is not so simple
I love u so much and it kills me when u don't listen
so please mom would u listen to me for once?

* this is a poem I wrote about my mom. She is always getting on me about everything and its hard because she wont listen to me. please rate and leave comments I would appreciate it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    Whoa I so know what you mean...
    I think a lot of people can but they dont know how to express it.
    my mom is that way.. she always says she loves me but when shes expecting a response from me i just say ok.. she doesnt listen to how things are to me.. she knows that Im just 14 and that i cant make a difference she knows i have made an @$$ load of bad mistakes, she knows i wont ever be able to correct them, but its like she wants me to be exactly what she was when she was little or do the things that she didn't do... when i finally find someone who makes me happy she complains about my additude.. she says either im too happy for myself or that i look like im some happy freak trying to make people think being happy is a thing only for stupid people... but enough about me. you did a good job explaining things even though it didnt always rhyme i can understand why 5/5

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