Splendidly suoerb poem Bill!!!

Bill,
Really good poem my friend! 5/5 keep it up and thank you so much for sharing your poetry...you're a great poet and you're really inspiring too! Take care and keep it up ^_^

I really enjoy reading ur poems!!! u have talent!!1 wen u were young i bet u had tha gurl all crazy for u wit your romantic poems!!! i would relly apprecate it if you took a look AT MY POEMS AND TELL ME IF IM DOING GOOD OR BAD!! PEOPLE SAID THAT IM GUD BUT UNLESS I HEAR IT FROM SOME AS TALENTED AS YOU I WONT BELIEVE IT!!! Opps my mad for tha capitals!!! thanx and i wish you gud luck in tha future!!!

I loved this image that you weaved:
"Damp hair framing your face
Picture perfect beauty
Your arms around my waist
My strong hands upon your hips
Pulling you tight, tasting your lips..."

Pure perfection. You have an amazing way of expressing love. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry, Bill. Nice job.

Wow you did an amazing job on this poem! Keep it up! I love your writing!
~Sammy

It's sooo cute. I love it. Can't say more........that's how good it was.

That was an awesome poem, i like your unique rhythm skills, i hope you get a lot of comments and the best comments your poem was great

Great job! This is the first of your poems that I've read but I agree with our fellow poets that you did a marvelous job. Feel free to check out some of my poems if you get the chance :)

Yes you do have an amazing way of showing all your love.. twists my heart.