Comments : My Saviour

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was beautiful. truer words couldnt ahve been spoken. nice flow as well.

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    Beautiful poem everyone should be so lucky to meet the person who can do that for them and experience it. beautiful!

  • This is a beautiful poem and i often feel like that...great job in expressing yourself....5/5 by the way

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Awww this was sooo beautifuuuul!! i loved it i especially liked how you went into talking about the stars the moon and the sun that was so cute i loved the flow excellent 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hey its me again
    Emma I loved this poem
    I hope Ill feel loved like that one day
    thanx for letting me see some of your great talent
    Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Ruby as far as flow is concerned- you got it just right! Well done... these are the poems I most enjoy reading! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    That's really sweet, and I love how you brought some metaphorical warmth and things into your poem, it was really nice to read. Good job!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sango

    I love it, I felt the waves, the warmth & all from this poem, i must admit you're an excellent writer, i'll add you to my favorites!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Absolutly beautifull..It flowed amazingly.. im speechless, great work!! I really loved it!!!