Obvious

by lunachan   Oct 25, 2005


How obvious is it,
that I miss you?
That every time I'm near you
I want to hold you
and never let go?

How obvious am I,
when I stare at you until you feel it?
When I stand close to you,
hoping for you to slip your arm around my shoulder?

Is it obvious
that I love you?
at least I think I do.
I feel just like they say I'm supposed to.
But then again,
What do they know?

I don't know what happened
Something awoke inside of me,
and now I'm hooked.
Thinking of you every day,
and dreaming about you every night.

You awoke my dreams.
I've never had this many before you.

How obvious am I?
How obvious is it
that I love you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is truly an amazing work. Well done indeed. The diction is accurate and precise. The structure also helps to convey and develop meaning, while the imagery is subtle and original. The use of rhetorical questions is very effective and you certainly have a talent for poetry. Well done!