My love

by Ambar K   Oct 25, 2005


My heart says you are mine, Just mine
But why are you acting as though you are not
Although I hear a voice
You havenâ??t called out to me
Oh please just give me a hint
Tell me what I did
It seems as though you are mad at me
Why am I suffering?
When I ddidnt??t even do anything
Why donâ??t you just come comfort me
But it seems that hasHas nott even crossed your mind
Still my heat says you are mine
If you want me or not itâ??s up to you
But I will have you,
Because that is my hearts deepest desire
And my hopes and dreams are not some broken star
You are mine whether you like it or not

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    I agree with joseph b, it's a big unstable ( is that the right word?! lol ) in places but it's still good. check out some of mine if you get a chance. thanks. x

  • 18 years ago

    by phuckwithme_imsuperman

    I like it kinda unclear at points but i really like it its good

  • 18 years ago

    by Justine Lopez

    It was good i liked it in away it remind me of this dude

  • 18 years ago

    by livingwith

    Its pritty good, though i like how the mood switches to the end, its bitter sweet, if you understand.

  • 18 years ago

    by Monika

    Bravo

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