Desert Rose

by aaron c s   Oct 25, 2005


Beauty of the desert rose,
Think of thoughts you want to know.

Fantasy of the desert storm,
Minds alike that begin to form.

Softness of the desert sand,
Thoughts bring us hand in hand.

Burning of the desert wind,
To the desert rose, once again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    I really like this poem of yours. It's short, but you wrote it beautifully. Keep writing and take care.
    > Kiesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really liked this idea, its very short but i think it holds a lot of meaning, and you ended this poem very well. this was my favorite part though

    Softness of the desert sand
    Thoughts bring us hand in hand

    very nice, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey aaron,
    short but enjoyable to read.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    simply beautiful.
    yeah, that's it.
    simply a beautiful piece.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    Good work. a great metaphor to pic to compare something so beautiful. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Very interesting topic and great way of describing something so simple

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