Comments : Fate's Calling

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Brilliant write my dear, definitely the best of its kind. Your words are perfect and it flows scumptiously well together :-). I'm sorry if this is true for you, it's hard to lose someone you love so much forever. I'm sure they're with you in spirit and wish for you to continue on life as happy as you can be though. Smile Britt, I love you, my angel. Take good care of yourself.

    Love always,
    Sarah.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    That is so beautiful. I am truly sorry if this happened to you. I don't know how hard it is to lose someone you love like that, but I know it must be extremely tough.

    There's a reason I wish there was no alcohol. Too many abuse it. I say it's not worth it with so many people being killed and such...even if some people use it responsibly, I don't believe it's worth it.

    Have I ever mentioned I admire your talent? I do.

    "I promise to always love you and to never go away"
    ~He didn't go away, he's in your heart. ;)

    Take care, dear.

    Rose
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    This world gives too little and takes all you need
    It leaves you wounded and left to bleed
    Emptiness is my life, until I see you staring back
    The piece that I am missing, I will no longer lack

    I love this part...it tells the truth pretty much...and the whole poem too...I must say this is one of the best poem I read so far...really good...keep it going...love to see more...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilium

    Wow that is really beautiful * bows down to u* you are a poetry goddess

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Awwww. Beautifully written! It's amazing. I read it three times! :O! I love it. And and and me love you too! Cookie giver! Hehe. BOOM. Amazing points for Britt ;) *huggles* Keep it up, babe. You're amazing! :)

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    I really hope this isnt true. comment back

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great poem I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey
    beautiful poem
    love the line when you close your eyes and hear her say she loves you....my heart stopped wen i read that one...
    and when i read my poem....my heart stops everytime...its called "You and the Moon"
    read it if you find time...
    dont worry if your loss is real....you'll get over it...

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    I like the poem 5/5