Wow... once again a beautiful piece of writing! :) 5/5 Take care hun, Tess xoxo

Once again, great poem

Tim

Wow hun, this is so true, I loved this poem it gave me goosebumps the way you portrayed the "pasT" was very well donee, very unique hun. I loved it this one really showcases your amazing talent and ability to change anything into everything, well done, lubb youu

Dear anna,
refeering to your poem to me about our brocken friendship......i still love you more than you'll ever no but all you do treat me badly that is not my fault, i'm sick of it i've had enough i wish you wouldn't push me away have one day you want to talk to me and the next you don't, you've pushed me to far and cut me to deep. you and i both no i'm not selfish and i can't believe i've been so upset over you untill last night daniel set me straight, its taken me this long to realise you don't care for me, i open my heart up to you but too many times you throw it in my face. we all make mistakes say the wrong things do the wrong things but the way you treat me its gone on for to long and i can't deal with it anymore you bring me down i'm trying to escape so i guess its goodbye, i still love you and i wish we didn't have to part but its the choice you've made me make.....sorry i wasn't good enough for you sorry i'm not like everyone else you who you can talk to normally except me, clearly i wasn't ever your best friend i realise that now it took me this me this long.....goodbye anna i wish you well i do with all my heart i'll never stop loving you...sorry for all the pain i've caused you, i'll be out of your life soon when i move schools and then you won't have to think about me ever again or have to deal with or or anything you won't hear from me you'll just no i'm always wtaching over you no matter where i am
love ALWAys
kate-DIPSY xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Yeah...it's true...I really agree with you...if we do not want to end up as a jerk and look back at the past...which is now...then beware of how you act now...cause it will be the past...is that what you are trying to say...it seems to me that way...

Wow this is incredible, possibly my favorite you've written this is really good im jealous!!!!! this is greattt...the first and last stanzas are my favorite you really did a good job here...this is my other favorite one

The past is in the past,
Is what they all say.
But how are you to forget it,
If it has such an intent to stay?

very true and very well said

5/5 great job

Another great poem =]

That was such an amazing poem.. i am working on one of the same topic, but i doubt it wud turn out as gud as this one.. ur rhyme and flow are absolutely amazing, and ur choice of words cudnt be better.. i so love ur last stanza.. but i think u meant "now" in its first line (of the last stanza) instead of "know"
gr8 write, never stop
take care, and thnx bunches 4 the comment
Nannoush

Excellent poem.. thanks for commenting on mine also...
Tisha~

Hey, this is so true. loved it. 5/5

Wow - Your poems are so deep I just can't read them in all one sitting. I almost hate to call this a poem because it's so much more than that. It's wonderfully created.

Nice written i have to say :)

Great poem!

pili

Omg, this is sooo good. I need you teach me how to write.. ahh I'm tired of being embarrased and not knowing what to say. Good day.

Hun, I like this one hun. It is true with a bit of optomism at the end tying it all together. Don't worry, your old poems really aren't bad hun I was enjoying the read. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Yeah, everyone has low times the creep up every now and then so I guess I will have to grit my teeth and hope it will be over soon. That poem is a bit strong, and I have thought better about posting it, so I think I'll thank it off, though your vote was noted. Thanks love. Nice to hear from you. Hope you are doing well.

Always,
Tainted Mikochan