These cuts of mine...

by Forsaken Redeemer   Oct 27, 2005


One for every tear I shed,
Two for my heart filled with dread,
Three for every lie you told,
Four for when you broke my soul,
Five for when you tore my heart,
Six for when I fell apart,
Seven for when you destroyed my Eden,
Eight for when you stole my freedom,
Nine for this dull, aching pain,
Ten for this insanity running through my veins,
Eleven for each bit of happiness you take,
Twelve for all the pain you make,
Thirteen for the broken pieces of me you left,
Fourteen for each and every breath,
One more cut to seal my Death...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    I like how you write. its very ... close to home.

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I liked the simplicity of using numbers at the start of each line, yet the depth you portray. It is painful in a way I can relate to, I'm glad you can express yourself so well.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I enjoyed reading that!!!!! I liked it alot it showed alot of pain, which i can relate too!!! I also like to thank you for your kind critism on my poems, i enjoy that you wrote what you honestly thought Thank You!!!!!!Plz continue commenting and i will do the same promise!!!!!

    Joclyn

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥and its just an Untold Love story♥

    I liked the poem .. it was different and had a lot of meaning to it .. i love your work

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