The Wind Blows

by *rach*and*bee*   Oct 27, 2005


By Bee

The wind
blows across the water
ripples
waves
than back to the glass-like surface
like your face
etched in worry
creased in sorrow
than back to completely numb
blank
reflecting the world around you
but never able to look in
and so like the surface of the water
that it scares me
and I tend to shy away
from you
and even from my own emotions
for I fear
that like you
I am becoming like the water
flowing over everything
never staying in one place
being passed over
but yet being used
needed
but like water
never enough to quench your thirst
and I'm slowly
dripping
slipping away
all because you are like the
wind blown across the water

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  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey britt, i loved this when u wrote it during....global...haha...ur so good at making the reader feel like ur description, i love all the similes w/ the water....
    does this by any chance have to do with...well...me? and....u? becoming sorta like me? if it is, im srry....just in general....for being that way...
    anyways, great job, u know i love ur work always,
    xoxo~*rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Love it bee!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Omfg bee...that absolutely rocked!
    love you,
    gerra

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Great message and great emotion bejind it and the similis were amazing but i couldnt read it right, i know u wrote it in a specific format so ppl read it right but i couldnt. i still thought it was an amazing poem though. 5/5

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