Puts a whole new meaning to thumbs up doesnt it!!

Nice one.

Great poem I love it!

That sound bout like me in my sleep!!! I like it!!

Sexy! ;D

H-O-T-T HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very sexy!!

S.E.X.Y !!!!!! no better word

-Jamie

DANG!!!!! I wish this could happen to me like everyday:) Now this is HOTTT

Haha u pervert lol. That's like that song put you to bed. lol. Good job. though but i think in the 4th stanza it's suppose to be couldn't.
-vino

Pretty much the epitome of everyone's dream (if you have any sort of a sexual mind, that is) and it was hot, I must say. Not beautiful...but definately hot. Great job.
~Julianne

I agree with midnight sun, it was a sensual piece and very well written as well. I've never had the courage to write a work like this for fear of where it would take me.. maybe someday. keep up the good writes, you have the knack.

Bravo, it is a hard topic to write without going over the top sometimes, you have balanced well and gotten a nice prolonged sensual piece of erotic art.

Very sensual

OMG...to be honest, I have read many poems under the erotic category in here, but never came to one as literal and visually clear as this one. It made me cringe. So direct to the scenes and fast paced.