Comments : Sleeping orgasm

  • 19 years ago

    by Bernadette

    Puts a whole new meaning to thumbs up doesnt it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by sinister

    Nice one.

  • 19 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great poem I love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    That sound bout like me in my sleep!!! I like it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Sexy! ;D

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    H-O-T-T HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kandace

    Very sexy!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    S.E.X.Y !!!!!! no better word

    -Jamie

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    DANG!!!!! I wish this could happen to me like everyday:) Now this is HOTTT

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Haha u pervert lol. That's like that song put you to bed. lol. Good job. though but i think in the 4th stanza it's suppose to be couldn't.
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Pretty much the epitome of everyone's dream (if you have any sort of a sexual mind, that is) and it was hot, I must say. Not beautiful...but definately hot. Great job.
    ~Julianne

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with midnight sun, it was a sensual piece and very well written as well. I've never had the courage to write a work like this for fear of where it would take me.. maybe someday. keep up the good writes, you have the knack.

  • 14 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Bravo, it is a hard topic to write without going over the top sometimes, you have balanced well and gotten a nice prolonged sensual piece of erotic art.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very sensual

    • 8 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Re-reading this, I rather cringed, but I thank you for your comment.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    OMG...to be honest, I have read many poems under the erotic category in here, but never came to one as literal and visually clear as this one. It made me cringe. So direct to the scenes and fast paced.

    • 7 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not, but thank you for reading through to the end.