Then all the people flood in as you scream no u dont wana die only then u'll relise u want to live
*learned from experiance

;'-(hillary)-';

So this might sound kind of wierd
but...
I LOVE YOU!!!!

Thanks! I guess i love you to!:P

Really really good! 5/5.

It's very sad and touching! I understand what you are trying to say. It's a good job!

Hey awesome poem loved it well thought out! keep it up ur doing great
thx=) for the comment!

WOW....this poem is amazing!..You write soo well...I love this poem..It rly touched me

I have the full story of Daddy This Ones For You up. thought ude like a reminder er wut ev. enjoy.

Well I decided to read the poems that you wrote before I found you. I like this poem actually. With this story in it, of this girl going to school, being all alone. Very well done. It's good =)

Love ya ;)

Oh and by the way, thank you so much for your comment on my poem "Paradise of Lies". It meant a lot to me. The inspiration? Well.. 2 years ago a lost a friend. And i wrote that poem, on the exact day he died (2 years later). I usually don't write about it. I find it difficult. Unable to find words for it. So I'm actually very happy that you loved it. I kind of feel relieved.

-xxx- Love you so dam much hun =)

Whoa. thats sad if only ppl didnt really have to go thru that...
i love ur writing!