Dark Cloud (revised)

Laying in the same spot
I appear to have a dark cloud hovering over my head
All I seem to do is cry, like a waterfall that never goes dry
The bright sun never shedding light into my dreary world
The rain always flowing, my heart flooded to the max
Then it comes to a sudden halt, I hate everything around me
When I finally take the desiring action to end the misery
Its a moment too late, my blood drains from severed veins
I am found alone. No note in sight, just a bloody knife
Laying in the same spot

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