Goodbye my "friend"

by SSSAAMMMYY   Oct 29, 2005


I feel broken inside
This feeling is impossible to hide
Our friendship is gone
And it's time to move on
But I don't know if I can
It feels as though it just began
I have no power to change what has happened
I guess this is the end
And now you are not my friend
I don't know how I will be able to overcome this
How can I live as though our friendship never did excist?
Well I am sorry but I can't
It's to hard to forget all the time we shared
All the time when I thought you actually cared
Well I guess you don't care
And you never will
I hope you know how much this is going to kill
But I have to do what is right
And that is to end this fight
Good-bye my friend
Who is all pretend
I hope my life is better without you
You were never true
And from that our friendship is something that was impossible to persue

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    You really cared about this person, you write a lot about them, sorry bout the whole deal losing friends is hard ecspecially best friends but it makes you stronger im sure. the flow was good sometimes you got off your rhyming pattern but i think you could call this just free verse so it's alright great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I wont b suprised if i hear that u r famous 4 ur poems sumday. u have a gr8 gift, plz make sure 2 use it. 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    One of your best. one again the rhyming pattern was a bit scatterd, but i really liked this one. well done

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    They just keep on getting better.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dora

    Omg i loved it that was so good...thanks for commenting mine...Keep it up!

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