Comments : 0ò0With_Out_U0ò0

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You know it is. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweetist sin

    I like it kinda like my poems!!!~~~~~

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    AWww dat's sweet. i gave u 5/5.. If u get a chance read sum of mines poems tanx Ciao....... =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats really sweet, ur rhyming is so cute, keep it up xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    OMG...that totally tells how I feel too...and it is very beautifully written...flows perfectly...I really love it...

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*really sweet great work keep it up*~ XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by lacy byrum

    I loved this one simply because i know where you are coming from in this poem bc it reminds me of, me!

  • 18 years ago

    by James

    WOW.....that was great poem and the rhyming was very good...ur an awesome writer :) keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yeah lol...loving someone may be sweet sometimes...yet hurtful most of the times...that's all I hev 2 say...

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Great poem, hun... keep em coming, because you are a great writer!