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by aaron c s   Oct 30, 2005


My life is now a hurricane.
Everything has been turned upside down.
My face is distorted with all this pain.
Everything turning round and round.

My life's going down a rough stream.
Keep on swimming, trying to be strong,
But the rocks hit me and I want to scream!
I know i deserve this, i know i was wrong.

My life is now on a one stop flight.
I keep feeling like I'm going to fast,
And the harnesses on me are bound too tight.
But yet in this flight, i come, in last.

My life feels like it's stuck in the snow.
Trying to get out, but getting, nowhere.
I don't know why I'm trying, there's nowhere to go.
Life is starting to suck, now that. i don't care!

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  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Oh, i know this feeling, almost like a car that keeps jerking forward and backward because it can't go either way. very good poem, its hard to make ones like this ryhme since it all just wants to flow out at once, but u did a very nice job w/ it. love it, as always,
    xoxo~*rachel*

  • 18 years ago

    by cant sleep

    Wow. confusing. so wait....ur life is hard? but somehow you get through? idk. holla bak, comment on my new poem...and tell me what this means. lol

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