Comments : Alone

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was very sad...but it was a good poem. keep writing and thank you for the comments.
    good luck

    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Hey that poem is sad but really well written, if you want someone to talk to im here for you.

    sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Good poem! It held a lot of emotion. I'm sorry that your life is like this. You can email me if you ever need someone to talk to!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was sad.. and i hope that you dont feel that way anymore.. remember, there are always people there for you.. okay.. i really think that you should pay attention to capitalizing the start of lines.. that is just the way you should write..

    i wish, just wished i was loved
    ^ should be "wish" not "wished"

    by someone who cares
    ^ should be "cared"

    i wish that they'd 4give and 4get it
    ^ should be "forgive" and "forget" dont use internet slang in the sad poem section..if you want to write like that, put it in the appropriate section..

    good job though.. 4/5