Serena, this is a wonderful, heartfelt poem. Keep writing, you have talent.

A lovely mixture of fantasy and a tortured heart. just my cup of tea ;o)

Wonderful work!!!

I love the words you use to describe it...and yeah its true that nothing is what it seems...nice one...

Wow this one hell of a kick ass poem!!! really funky and orginianal!!! am very impressed darlin!!! plz keep writing a poem hasnt made me smile like this for ages !!! xxxxxxx

I like it

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!