Painted with Pain

by Lies   Nov 1, 2005


Your tangled web of lies
drowning in my sore eyes.
Your love is so tainted
black my heart is painted.

You left me heartbroken
all tear and blood soaken.
You've hurt me so much
deficient of your touch.

I'm still waiting on you
Is that what I should do?
How much more can I take?
Maybe its a mistake.

IM REALLY SORRY I KNOW IT SUCKS BUT ITS A WORK IN PROGRESS SO I JUST THOUGHT I WOULD THROW IT OUT THERE N SEE WHAT PPL THOUGHT

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  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Hey, this doesn't suck! I think it's great, full of emotion, and that is the most important thing.