Hey,
I really like the style of this, its unsual but really effective. I think we all have a fairytale life like that! And some of us have a real life like urs too...
Again thanx 4 the positive comments.

Hey, neat rythm (ieesh, brain pause)
neways, loved it. very expressive. its seems the whole worl has problems, doesnt it? yet sometimes they are looking so hard for help, they forget to give help as well. if you need me, im here.

Hun this is a really great poem, i love it, im sorry this is happening 2u but im always here 4 u

i love u lots

Maddy xxx

Hey babe thank 4 ur comment, it meant a lot, i could say that i love u every second of the day too well gtg bii

It nice

Two sides to the person, never would have thought of that great job