Forever and today

by Fadedstar   Nov 2, 2005


I love u more then u would know
I need you more then i show
right now i miss u i miss u so
all I'm asking and wishing for
is that u don't ever let me go
u mean so much more then anything.
i hope u feel the same as i do,
because no matter what i think of only you.
maybe i love u more then i should,
but i don't care,
i wouldn't stop if i could
loving u makes me happy
and i hope your happy to
just want u to feel the same
cuz the way i feel about u,
cannot be changed
and that will always remain.
I'm just hoping and i pray
that U love me forever and today*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    Aawwww a beautiful piece, Just 2 let u now u r nw on my favourites cs I think ur poems are brilliant!!!
    love
    beth xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by *heidi;

    Nice one. i like it. plz comment on other poems of mine. much appreciated.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I liked it especially the first five lines...but in the middle it became hard to follow because the flow of the poem was interupted...but besides that it was an amazing and heartfelt poem...Much Love...Joclyn

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