Well written and heartfelt.

I loved the imagery and the rhythmic flow. the words you used to describe things were fantatic. there were some parts that slowed down too much for the rest of the poem. just my opinion. i liked the poem. a definate 5/5

Ur poems just keep getting better and better i love ur writing its great, this poem is fab too, i like how u ended it xox rc

Great poem and super imergry

Wow hun this is extremely well written and from the heart 5/5 xox

Love the details and imagery and the way the poem has abstract ideas. very nice job

You have such a unique way of writing! It's truly mind blowing as is this piece! Well done as always and keep it up~Holly

Great job! that was so amazing. loved it. 5/5

could you please check out my newest poem, 'Just Hate Me'? thnx

Nikki,
I got to say Your talent is beautiful. This poem absolutely beautiful as your heart....Such a heartfelt write....Awesome....

Love Ann

Beautiful, the ending was totally unexpected. does it snow in texas? sorry, i was just wondering. lol i love your word choice and the flow. take care! XXXXX
JL

*CONGRATS!*

(sorry i accidently pressed enter)
thats so exciting and i wish both you and the baby all the luck in the world! XXXXX
JL

Suprisingly It Does Snow In Texas! But Just Every Once In a While, Actually Last Christmas Eve It Snowed...It Was Pretty Cool *Hugs* And Thank-u xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

*hugs back* welcome :) it snows in philly all the time. lol XXXXX
JL

Your So Lucky! I Love The Snow

Wow...that poem was amazing i really loved it..you're on my favs hun!!
keep up the awesome writing..u inspire me xoxo

It fits most of the american teens to a tee.

Beatuiful writing keep it up. I tell u one thing you are definetely amongst the best writers on here, u got a talent like no other continue to do what u do. you will be the 2nd poet that Im going to add to my favorites list. I really enjoyed it.

Breathtaking. Good Job, Doll.

Wow the imagery used is impressive. . . love it like i love my little woodland.

read some of mine
Laura XxX

Your poem is really beautiful!!