Omg hun wow, this is so me in life right now its unbeliveable especially the verse "My parents no longer care,
They don't want to see.
That their child is really bleeding,
This wasn't how it was meant to be." its so true aww this brought me to tears its so beautiful hun your words are so touching I dont know what I would do without your poetry
you were wrong your friends haven't slipped away nor have they been pushed, at least i haven't cause your an amazing friend and i love you soooooooo much Thankyou for being there, cause i need you XOXOXO
Oh...you have so many people that love you. and by the looks of some of your other comments you mean everything to your friends. i really love each and every poem of yours... they are all so different and unique ... great work =) x
I read a few of your first poems and you have gotten so much better since then i really look up to your work this is incredible
My friends are in the vicinity,
I've pushed them all away.
I didn't want them to see me,
Just rotting to decay.
that's my favorite part im really glad i read so much of your stuff cause i really love your work this is awesome and i completly know how you feel on this subject you ended this perfectly i've heard songs and stories relating to the whole calm before the storm thing but i've never seen it worded this way this was awesome great job 5/5
That, was DEFINITELY one of the best poems on this site. Amazing. WOW! You truly do have talent, and every one of your poems I've read have just made me go speechless. No exaggeration, my mouth dropped. Fantastic poem. Full points, obvioulsy.
Thanks for the comments on mine. Well appreciated, and to let you know, you are in my favorites. =)
Stay strong and you will override this storm. I've been through all those times and am still going through them. I can speak to this really. I hide the real me for everyone else. Don't push your friends away, they all want to be there for you