I get drained quite a lot talking to certain kinds of people. This is about the energetic cost of everything in a philisophical setting.

I liked this, it's different and seems personal.
You've used a good choice of words.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

I love reading this type of poetry and
you do it so well...Very well written..

Shelby

It was good but i didn't like the way in which you closed the poem.Am i right?

Your poem was creative and expressed a philosophical look at life and the way we human beings, in our various roles in life, moving within it. I enjoyed reading it.

I'm always emotionaly skint these days

Shhhh! Dont tell Mr Brown about this - he'll find a way to tax us on our thoughts and emotions! :)

I must be thinking and feeling way too much lately - Im feeling exhausted. I wonder when my dividend will arrive for my efforts?

Oh... I didn't realise I had already read this one (and commented)... funny that cause this time around I read it differently to what I must have got out of it last time around.

More like a prostitution of life - everything gained comes at a price, a cost in life where everything must remain in the balance.

It was better the second time around. Cheers big ears.

Mo

I think I could really relate to this ,it seems like everything in life costs us something ,sometimes just in energy,it reminded me of how tired I get sometimes just trying to be there for people who depend on me.I liked this a lot Kevin.

Love the word play of the title. I don't necessarily think it fits with the context but it did make me giggle. I do however love the unusual imagery and awesome metaphor. My favorite perhaps, "hospital waiting for birth or death"

I hope to learn to hold a flow and mantain this depth to attract a more sophisticated audience

Dude, your on the wrong site :P. Loved it mate. Dare say your style is v.british

I love the title, very clever!