Our friendship is OVER

by SSSAAMMMYY   Nov 2, 2005


Stop it!
We're through
I can't take this from you
You always hurt me
And its like you don't even care
I thought our friendship was rare
I'm sick of how you treat me
Can't you just let me be
What did I ever do to you
Nothing
I was the best friend I could be
But I guess you just couldn't see
The time has come
I shall depart
I hope you know you broke my heart!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Many times this happens. Don't let it get you down! Become stronger from it! And, most importantly, learn from these kind of relationships. 5/5!

    Hugs,

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was good it was short, i think it was definatly more of a rant then anything else, your rhyming was verrry simple words like be and see me and be...that kinda thing went on a lot in this poem...sometimes you rhymed other times you didn't so it was kinda messy i loved the ending it was my favorite part they were the best rhymed words out of the whole thing and it just sounded really nice so 4/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was good it was short, i think it was definatly more of a rant then anything else, your rhyming was verrry simple words like be and see me and be...that kinda thing went on a lot in this poem...sometimes you rhymed other times you didn't so it was kinda messy i loved the ending it was my favorite part they were the best rhymed words out of the whole thing and it just sounded really nice so 4/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Short and snappy. a very quick poem with plenty of emotion. the last line in particluer works beautifuly. great work, and hang in there

    Ruby

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