Romeo and Juliet

by BeeBeeGun   Nov 3, 2005


*** I recently read Romeo and Juliet in English so I wrote a poem about it hope you all like it***

Romance of disaster
leading to a death
The silent yells of laughter
are coming to a rest

No person is aware of
the last gasps of breath
For these two young children
about to face their death

One dose of poison
that is known to kill
Is taken by Romeo
after the death of his girl

But unbeknown to him
She would wake up by his side
Because the sudden cause of death
would only last two nights

So Juliet woke to Romeo
which was a terrifying sight
She tried to take the poison from his lips
but she had to use his knife

The sudden death of the children
brought both Capulet and Montague together
The death of Romeo and Juliet
will haunt them both forever

**please vote and comment and I'll try to return the favour **thanks**

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so good. You wrote the shorted version of the story and you made it make sense.....lol I never really understood half of what they were saying. But I like yours better. :) 5/5

    Mallori