Life equals death

by Chantelle   Nov 3, 2005


I cannot move
I cannot speak
I've lost my senses
I feel so weak
The world is frozen
So I can see
If people around
Feel just like me
Lost and broken
Fragile and sad
In this world
I see only the bad
There is so much evil
Which I cannot explain
My tears are hidden
By the drops of rain
So as time unfreezes
And I can move again
I hope to god
For the broken hearts to mend
I wish the hate would disappear
But I know you're too far
Too far to hear
My hopeless thoughts and endless fears
Will become too much
Too much to bare
Because of this world
We lose so many lives
To the monstrous tragedy
Of suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey chantelle...you've got GREAT talent..rhyming poems and making each line balanced is not an easy thing to do. Not only have you done that, but you have expressed your feelings so clearly. I loved reading it.
    Wondering if we could become friends...im dhaval...remember "you and the moon" and "heart on paper"?
    Thanx for the comments they mean a lot...if you would get to know me (and i wanna get to know you :) ) leave a mssg arnd by leavin a comment. Thanx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    Hey, this is amazing, i really enjoyed reading it

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