I feel her cry

by SilentSymphony   Nov 3, 2005


In complete shock, i approach her in silence.
It is raining on her face.
And it looks as if the clouds were
forecasting over her sky blue eyes.
Her fear echoed in her tremulous breathing.
And she shook slightly as she sat there
in that hospital room.
Waiting, watching her thoughts,
trying to calm her.
But there was nothing to say.
Nothing to do.
"I cant believe what happened."
she whispered.
And quietly i began to sob,
as if i knew each waking moment of
her mind reflecting through her tears ...
I could feel her pain-just by touching her.
Just looking into her eyes.
And i am scared, please don't let it hurt anymore.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oooh, I'm loving the mystery in this. It's very effective!
    I absolutely adore these lines:

    "And it looks as if the clouds were
    forecasting over her sky blue eyes"

    and

    "as if i knew each waking moment of
    her mind reflecting through her tears ..."

    So well written, keep it up~Holly