Good job 5/5 keep it up!!
Leona

I start waiting
For life to heal

that really struck me, i like that a lot!
i like the line breaks too, makes it more interesting.

I love the message that your projecting with this poem its really good i hope everyone else gets it like i did 5/5

lots of love
☼Becky☼

This is pretty unique...the format u use is slightly different...but it flows very well...I like it...

Great poem!! I love the emotions expressed by your words. Fantastic Job!

Very unique piece, ur really different than the others, the style of writing, the thinking...it's different...I like it...

This poem leads you from one emotion into another very smoothly.excellent.

As above, a unique format and a lovely flow, full of wonderful imagery and description.
All the best Joey

As above, a unique format and a lovely flow, full of wonderful imagery and description.
All the best Joey