I almost...

by brkendown   Nov 3, 2005


I looked in the mirror today i and i almost could see the girl who i want to be!
i almot thought that the smile was real
i almost thought that i was the girl who they all saw
who they all see
i almost.. i almost...
i almost.. does that mean that i am getting better or worse
maybe im just geting better at this fake smile thing!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Someone gave this a 3 with no comment so i figured i'd tell you why...this really isn't much of a poem...one of the most descriptive words you used was fake, so not a very good vocab at all, i know this is probably just a rant, but i think this one was best left in a journal but i think you could have developed an idea off this because the message you got across very bluntly is a pretty neat poem idea, i'd like to see a real poem made out of this but yeah that's why this got a 3 already

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