Lost

by Ashlin   Nov 3, 2005


Lost in your confusion
lost in the thought
lost in the words around you
and all the pain that you have brought

lost in madness
lost in pain
lost in the crimson blood
as you sit in the dark, pouring rain

your mothers down stairs
your friend has just died
your daddy is gone
and yet no one has cried

*i have no idea.. it popped in my head and sounded good..*

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  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    Thanks lots u made my day or should i say night!! thanks lots muchly appreseated!! love ya always ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is really good!! doesnt it scare you that these thoughts of pain come up from no where?! it happens to me too some times when it happens i dont relize i felt them tell its writen down lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hope you will have more of those *pop up* moments, cause its a good poem. Keep up the good work!

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