Poor Little Floor Title

by *rach*and*bee*   Nov 4, 2005


By Bee

this floor tile is very special to me
it has always been there
and i think it
has been taken advantage of
i mean to say
what would you do
if you were walking along
and that tile disappeared from beneath you
ahhhh.......bang
you would fall and
then say to yourself
i wish i had paid a more attention to that poor little floor tile

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  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hahaha........well i don't mean to laugh.....but under the sercomstances......well when i wrote this poem i was actually looking at a floor tile so it didn't have a meaning then.....or i should say.....it ddidn't until i relized that i had wrote it with out thinking.....and that those were my true feelings.....i'm a stange one i know.....gesh floor tiles...!!!!
    luv ya'lls lots
    Bee

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    YES! EXACTLY BEE! sometimes i feel like the floor tile. so i totally see what you are saying great poem!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Loved the metaphor. loves is kinda like a floor. never thought of it that way. beautiful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Lol

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