Excellent!! 5/5....i lvoe the imagery so much!! and the words you chose fit together like a puzzle very good

Yer gud poem :)

Meaning and so many truths and lies and all of what we call life. good job

Nice work! Really like this one =)

Gr8 poem
liked the idea behind it
5/5
love
amy

Wow that was amazing

I love the imagery and expressions you've used. A well written poem, good work.
*VioletRaven*

Perfectly written...i love all these poems.

Beautifully written. I loved it. The flow was amazing and word choice was great. good job.