I love the idea the poems awesome too. a few places you stopped rhyming i dont know why, and this part

true love hurts
as the say but is still find

dosnt really make sense kinda sounds like you meant as they say, but i still find
but i dunno i think just spelling errors though

i know between you and i
there's a lot of hate
i didn't know how to fix it
so i just picked up the blade

thats my favorite part i loved how you worded everythig for the most 5/5

Nice poem
nice flow
could be more intensified by adding more stanzas..
but i still liked it
5/5
love
amy

Thanks for your support. Great job on this poem. And I am glad you like my poems. Your on my fav. list ok?

::MELI::

Heeeyz ... wow sucha nice piece of writin... i rele loved it.
Well hope u feel better not n this is life it doesnt go our way always so just stay strong and always smile.

Thx for da comment by da way .. welcome ne time .. hope u lyked some of ma poems.

Omg girl another poem that i can totally relate to....i loved it and you're gonna make me start bringing out the tissues box *hugs* we'll make it thru lol, i gotta go now cuz i'm goin to school but i'll check out more of your poems after school.Great poem!!!!
luv ya jess xoxoxo

Things change for better
or for worse but my prospective
for toward life changed
when you became hers
^ that stanza confused me and in the next i think is might be supposed to be I??? idk but yeah captitaleze again and use punctuation!!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie

Awwww...hope you feel better... hope you find an everlasting relationship.

big hugs,

michelle

Aww very good poem
hope you find true love
i know how your feeling
keep up the good work

Hey this is really sad..hope your k...keep writing!:)
take care!
xxx

Yet again this poem is evry goodall of yours are very good, but yet again the blade isnt the answer it only makes thigns worse.

lots of lvoe
*~*Becky*~*