Awww..another sad poem...your really great at this...keep writing!
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I liked the repition of this poem and the flow was pretty good. You might want to break of your lines before they get to the end of the page, like in your first stanza, break off to another line before you get to the word "cover" it makes it look nicer and easier for the reader to read!

Very Unique.

Love MKKA.