YoU iS tHe OnE i WiLL aLwAyS MiSS!

by |[ThUg AnGeL 4LyF]|   Nov 7, 2005


Is there any chance
that us could ever be together again?!
Cause since the day you left
things haven't been the same
wat ever is supposed to be good
never feels as good as it should
all i could ever do was think about how lucky i was
but now all i ask myself is how can life get any worse?
i cry myself to sleep ,wishing for you to love me again and forever
i want us to be together always and 4ever cause this heartache without you by my side is killing me!
i sometimes wonder whats the point of being here
im never going to stop loving you boy
you is the one i will always miss!
i hope that one day you'll look at me again the way i always is lookin at you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by desiree

    Don't want to sound mean... but I agree as well... you have a lot of talent... your poem would be wonderful if you just watch your gramer... you can't always write how you talk... you feel me? sometimes what might sound right doesn't "read right"... keep trying sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey its a good poem! Not the best one iv ever read! But please dont take it the wrong way or anything! Its was still good! But the only thing i dont like about it is, is how you set it out!
    Like how you said
    Cause you is the one i always want!
    (or something like that!)
    I dont like it how you added "Is the one"! my opinion is that it would sound better if that sentence was written like this!
    Cause you are the one that i always want!
    Sorry if i sond mean! Its just my opinion! Abd i know everyone's different!
    lov Paige!
    Please look at some of my poems!
    thanx xoxoxoxo

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