Wow.. um... it's really sad and touchy.... but I loved the ending--- "the significance of laughs and cries"
very well written..

Love,
Ipsita

Quite a well balanced poem, well done

Hey hun, really great poem, its so good n full of emotion, keep writing coz u r reallii good at it!! keep ya head up high and never 4get dat y0o r loved...i hope that u r 0ok, i f y0o need someone 2 speak 2 im always here!! i no y0o dont no me but i want to help out if therz something i can d0o, im sorry y0o feel so much pain and it cant mend, hopefully it will get better 4 y0o

luv Maddison

Hey Saurav, Firstly thanks for commenting on my poem, secondly... it feels great to have an Indian poet.. :o))

Well great poem yaar...keep it up...u used some great/powerful words here. all the best

0hh hun. what a t0uching piece. very well written. great j0b. heartfelt piece! thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rK! meant al0t!
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

Tis is so good, it expresses a really different side to losing someone. brilliant.

stef/xx

Really nicely written, but its not true! Theres always sumthing to live for, altho it must seem hard right now xx

Excellent poem, very sad, but extremely well written. 5/5! take care,
emma xxx

This poem is so amazing..so heartfelt and sad..is this a true poem abut yourself..if it is im very sorry..5/5
keep up writing
n take care
Mel

Heart felt poem full of emotion but I'm sure there is something to live for thanks very much for your comment!

take care

I like the point your putting accross. but there is always something to live for. amazing poem!
~crystal

This is good. I hope you check out some more of my poems. Thanks for the vote.

That was great and the flow was very good. another excellent poem by you.
have a great day,
marjan

Quite interesting...but i like it.......u did a really good job

Very sad and touching...There are a
lot of things to live for...You just wrote
one..............??

Shelby

Nice poem keep up the good work. it was very nicely written.

I like the idea u have put into this poem its very creative great work xox me

It is such a painful poem.
i don't have words to comment u.
5/5

It is really nice. i don't have words for Praising your poem.

Thank you for your review on my poem..I have read your piece and I can only say that it is a very thoughtful poem filled with your deep emotions..There is one thing always to remember when we lose someone that we love, (it has helped me since my husband passed away)...there are always the fond memories, especially those that we enjoyed most....take care.