Comments : Didn't I Die?

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hi, Well to be honest, even i feel the same..."confused" but u wrote it nicely and the selection of words were good. Keep it up and take care. Love*** Nitin Mongia

  • 14 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Confuse me too...wait...I'll read it another time...

    Okey...now I get it...hmm...can actually picture the scene too...hey..this can make a good movie...lol...very good...I like it too...

  • 14 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    WEoah hun this is very deep I loved it it was really dark and unique and not to mention very expressive amazing job on this one hunn, well done keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Its dark but i like it! i think its rele good. omg your comments made me feel sooo much better. thanks so much. your such a good friend!!!! know that i am ALWAYS here for you. luv ya! ~lex

  • 14 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey this was heaps interesting hope everythings ok..great writing as always xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by ShayHope

    Hey, This was an awsome poem, so dark and everything it is AWSOME i think, if you want to know i have thought about doing some of this at times when i was upset and down, WELL LOVED THE POEM, you got talent...KEEP WRITIN xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem it was deep!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Woah hun.. that was a very awesome poem.. woah i hope ur ok.. remebr i love ya.. im always here 4 u!! keep ur head up high.. n live ur life even if i dont!! xoxoxmwa

  • 14 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Whether it was random thoughts or not id say it was a great poem keep it up
    take care
    HS

  • 14 years ago

    by Illusion

    Wow, this is a really good poem
    the greatest poems happen when you're not forcing them and when you're not sure what exactly you're writing about.

    Good Job
    5/5

    DemonChild

  • 14 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    It's ok to be confused, as long as you realize it, so then you can get help

    this poem was dark, lovely and descriptive, and overall a very nice poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Brandon

    I loved the poem and the memories it brought back seems so real. I like the fact that you wrote what you feel. Hey keep up the good work and if you have a chance look up Afterlife on mine and please comment if nothing else

  • 14 years ago

    by firexflys

    Well glad to know it's not true. but it's a good poem put together well. keep up the good work 5.5

  • 14 years ago

    by Liarr

    Its friking awsome!!!!! *-* woot

  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    Amazingly written!!!
    its sweet and true. I can feel the words from inside!!!
    keep it up
    much luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x