Aww it's really sad hun, I hope it's not true, because I think your beautiful. Whatever happened back then, it's in the past, let it be forgotten, Really good poem though, 5/5 as usual

That was emotionel... I relate to it... I totaly understand the voices inside ur head telling u things... those things suck... lol. God job on the poem.

That was very deep and emotional. i understand abou tthe voices telling you that you should die and that people would be better off without you. but none of its ever true.

Hey girl, thanks for the comment, i've been goin thru some rough times... sounds like you have been thru some rough times lately too? your a great writer and you need to stop listening to the voices in your head. ppl would miss you ppl do care.. ok, if you need to talk i'm always here, i'll email you whenver i can, hugs-hayley

Hey hunny i hope you are ok. This poem scared me a little. Tell me you are ok. I am ok now :)

I'm sorry you feel this way. But this was a great way to let it all out. You put a lot of emotion into it. 5/5

~ Tina

Omg, that as a gr8 poem, i kno exatcly how u feel, bcuz i feel the same. i luvd the rhyme scheme, and the feeling was wonderful! 5/5 for SURE!
~*Who Cares?*~

Awww.... don't give up... I have 3 Schizophrenic relatives....if you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you.

Big Hugs,

Michelle

Ps... if i took the poem wrong about Schizophrenia....sorry!

Aww, its very sad. Keep writing such amazing poems, ive added u to my fave's.
xxxx
tara

Wow..I related to that one alot..I hope you can stay strong..

Good job 5/5