You've Left Me Broken Hearted

by Illusion   Nov 8, 2005


Filled with deep remorse
The admonitions were ignored
He left me inconsolable
Crying on the floor

Immolation left behind
Just another to add to the succession
You imposed upon me
My heart still seems to be in your possesion

I still love you
But you've left a putrid taste behind
Now I get to watch you destroy someone else
I don't understand how you can be so evil, yet so kind

You seem to find impunity
With every crime you commit
I just hope this new girl
Can survive such a hard hit

Filled with deep remorse
The admonitions were ignored
You left me inconsolable
Broken hearted, crying on the floor

©2005 Shannon Maynard

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh WOW that was SOOOO good. It goes really deep almost made me cry. You're a great poet. Hope you're ok if you ever need to talk I'm here!!! 5/5 and you're going in my faves!!! :-)
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Eyes_Of_Rain

    Lovely heartfelt write. Very deep, and sad, yet I'm glad you are not with someone who is portrayed as evil, you deserve better. Be well poet.

    ~Sherry~

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    O that was a really good poem!!
    great work hun...i hope so too btw..
    take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    What a sad poem, but very good! Excellent write!

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