Very very well writen. 5/5. love the last part. check out mine if u get a chance.

Thank you for your reply and i will R&R some of your poems too.

Ultimate work Mam!! keep writing as i m sure the best is yet to come...Nitin Mongia

** If there is no Pain...There is no Poet **

Thank you soo much. =)

Awesome work. Very deep...
.:Samara:.
PS- thanks for the comment

Its was so sad but it was really good i loved it :) your really good. ♥

Very powerful and sad poem! I like the flow! Good job!

Great poem, very powerfully written.

5/5

WELL WRITTEN DARK POEM

Wow.. this is such an emotional poem.. it sets a dark mood.. flowed well and showed your true feelings.. its sad but also dark i like it =).. oh yea and congrat you won 3rd in my contest=) keep it up!

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