Heartbroken....

by hidden under lies   Nov 9, 2005


Every morning i wake up and i wish that i had you..heart broken I'm now nothing, my body feels sore and i cant pretend to be happy anymore, its hard for me to even think about it because my best friend is now with my boyfriend, i still am in love and it hurts everywhere for me...i just cant stop the tears....I'll keep trying to get up every morning and I'll keep trying to pretend like I'm still happy and I'll try to let you go....but I'm still in love.

i know this isn't a good poem so don't waste your time rating it....i just am really upset and i don't need people judging this poem because i know its not good i just had to write down some of my feelings.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Wow your feelings are very sad
    girl it does hurt nd you are only young
    it will never get any better untill you find mr right

    lily is right he doesnt deserve you
    your true to your self

    keep on wrighting to let your feelings out
    we are all here to support you

    lana

  • 18 years ago

    by Lily

    It comes form the heart and i think that the boy you love needs to open up his eyes and see what he's missing you deserve better despite what you may think....he doesn't deserve someone as great as you. SOmeone that has such a big heart and who writes poems to express her sorrow or greif that's a gift don't let it go to waste.